Changes between Version 7 and Version 8 of EggCookingTutorial/AdvancedEggCooking

Timestamp:

Dec 30, 2005, 7:26:49 AM (18 years ago)

Author:

anonymous

Comment:

Fix some of the english.

EggCookingTutorial/AdvancedEggCooking

@@ -7 +7 @@
 == Adding template ==
 
-To have a template we need directory and of course template itself. We will keep same simple "Hello world!" text in visible, but this time we will integrate our fine words in Trac layout.
+To have a template we need a directory and of course the template itself. We will keep the same simple "Hello world!" text, but this time we will integrate our fine words into a Trac layout.
 
 For that we need to create one additional directory:
@@ -14 +14 @@
 }}}
 
-In that directory create new file ''helloworld.cs'':
+In that directory create a new file ''helloworld.cs'':
 {{{
 #!text/html
@@ -27 +27 @@
 }}}
 
-Now you have created template for plugin. 
+Now you have created the template for the plugin. 
 
 == Tell Trac where template is ==
 
-Trac doesn't know where your template is so you have to tell it. This is done by adding ITemplateProvider method in ''helloworld.py''.
+Trac doesn't know where your template is so you have to tell it. This is done by implementing the ITemplateProvider interface in ''helloworld.py''.
 
 So you change few lines as following:
@@ -116 +116 @@
 == Copy template to egg ==
 
-Finally you have to include new template directory in egg.
+Finally you have to include the new template directory in an egg.
 
 So change ''setup.py'' to be like:
@@ -132 +132 @@
 == Building and deploying ==
 
-Building and deployment goes exactly same way as it was in previous tutorial [wiki:EggCookingTutorial/BasicEggCooking#Firstdeployment EggCookingTutorial/BasicEggCooking].
+Building and deployment goes exactly the same as it did in the previous tutorial [wiki:EggCookingTutorial/BasicEggCooking#Firstdeployment EggCookingTutorial/BasicEggCooking].
 
-Now you should see big "Hello world!" text integrated in Trac layout when you press that fancy button in main navigation bar.
+Now you should see a big "Hello world!" integrated into your Trac layout when you press that fancy button in the main navigation bar.
 
 == Aftermath ==
 
-Now you have added basic template for your plugin let's add final twist, put some static content like own stylesheet and one image. Continue to [wiki:EggCookingTutorial/AdvancedEggCooking2 EggCookingTutorial/AdvancedEggCooking2]
+Now that you have added a basic template for your plugin let's add the final twist, putting some static content like a stylesheet and an image. Continue to [wiki:EggCookingTutorial/AdvancedEggCooking2 EggCookingTutorial/AdvancedEggCooking2]